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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI have no idea why you want me to critique what I think is still one of your prettiest space works of which i remember you already changing one before. If it were mine I wouldn't touch it at all. But with no choice, if something must be added or changed I would suggest that near the bottom where the nebula goes really parrallel, I'd just make some areas bulge out or in a little and put some fragments of interrupting dust clouds to make the bottom less "straight" this would only apply to the area below the gas giant of course <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="Nod" /> perhaps for compositional purposes, you could add a smaller planet on the top-left corner to balance it out a bit too, and since planet-counts are better in odd numbers (to me anyway) the gas giant could be given a bigger sense of scale by yet another moon near the bottom of it, which of course would be very small in size <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Wink)" />Still one of my favourite space scenes, I wouldn't dare alter at least 90% of what's there already <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="
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